10 Şubat 2015 Salı

My Superhero - February 10th Homework

My superhero 

***Please look at the example and then do your homework. Be careful with the word order. Use and, but, or in your sentences. Use a dictionary for new words. You have until Thursday 21:00 to post your homework.

(Lütfen önce örneğe bakıp sonra ödevinizi yapınız. Kelime sıralamasına dikkat ediniz. and, but, or kelimelerini cümlelerinizde kullanınız. Yeni kelimeler için bir sözlük kullanınız. Ödevi -aşağıdaki yorum hanesine isim soy isimden sonra- göndermek için Perşembe 21:00 e kadar vaktiniz var.)

Nickname: Spiderman
Real name: Peter Parker
Occupation: Reporter
Age: 26
Likes: helping people, his girlfriend Mary-Jane, his family, taking pictures
Doesn't like: his enemies, Green Goblin
Can: climb walls, jump high, shoot spider web
Can't: run fast, carry heavy things
Adjectives: tall, strong, slow, helpful, kind, short brown hair, small brown eyes
Clothes: a blue and red spider costume, a mask

My superhero's nickname is Spiderman and his real name is Peter Parker. He is a reporter. He is twenty six. He likes helping people, taking pictures, his girlfriend Mary-Jane and his family but he doesn't like his enemies or Green Goblin. He can climb walls, jump high and shoot spider web but he can't run fast or carry heavy things. He is tall, strong, slow, helpful and kind. He has short brown hair and small brown eyes. He is wearing a blue and red spider costume and a mask.




17 yorum:

  1. MY SUPER HERO`S NİCKNAME İS ŞİMEBİLAK,REAL NAME İS JACKSON.He has got two eyes ,four fingers,two feed,two arms,two legs and yellow hair.About clouthes:He has got Şimebilak costum and mask.Costum:Long,big and drafw picture .But he hasn`t got cape.He likes flying,helping people.He doesen`t like to the evil or he doesen`t like the worst

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    1. Kelime hataları dışında büyük küçük harfe dikkat edelim Sİmay'cım. Bir de and, but, or cümlelerini daha fazla kullanmaya çalışalım :)

      two feed - two feet
      clouthes - clothes
      Costum:Long,big and drafw picture - There is a tall, big dwarf picture on the costume.
      doesen`t like - doesn't like

      THANK YOU !! <3

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  2. deniz Akdağ Nickname:Thunderboltman Real Name:Jordan Johnson Occupation:Doctor Age:28 Likes:Play video game , helping people , adventure. Doesn't like:Chaki and dark horse. Can:Run fast , lightning strike remove hose Can't:Die , Adjectives:strong,helpful and heavy,yellow hair,blue eyes. Clothes:Helmet,green top and legs be fıre transformed My süper hero's name is Jordan Jonnsan nickname is Thunderboltman.occupation is doctor.He likes advanture and video game. He doesn't like chaki and dark horse.He can run fast and lighting strike remove höse.He can't die.His legs be fire transformed.Can helmet and green top.

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    1. Cümlelere biraz daha dikkat edersek bir sıkıntı kalmaz Deniz'cim :)

      occupation is doctor - He is a doctor.
      lighting strike - strike lightening
      remove höse - Derste tam anlamını konuşalım :)
      His legs be fire transformed - Derste tam anlamını konuşalım :)
      Can helmet and green top. - He is wearing a helmet and a green top.

      THANK YOU !! <3

      Sil
  3. my superhero's nickname
    muscle man real nameis jack spiser.Heis postman
    he is twenty.He like helping peple and animal.His girlfriend selena flipper.
    He like selena and family.But he doesn't his enemies nightwolf,electro,firmanan and brainreader.He can swim,very jump boost,run and climb.But he can't fly.He is tall,people helpful,short black hair,small eyes, big nose,long,eyebrow,big, feet,long arm and big ear.
    He is wearing a green t-shirt,a dark blue short,


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    1. Cümlelerde am,is,are ya da -s takısı gibi kurallara dikkat etmemiz gerekiyor. Onun dışında oldukça yaratıcı :)

      my superhero's nickname IS muscle man
      His girlfriend IS selena flipper
      He likeS Selena and HIS family
      very jump boost - JUMP VERY HIGH
      people helpful - HE HELPS PEOPLE
      short black hair,small eyes, big nose,long,eyebrow,big, feet,long arm and big ear - HE HAS GOT short black hair,small eyes, big nose,long,eyebrow,big, feet,long arm and big ear

      THANK YOU !! :)

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  4. hello my name is Merve GİRGİN. NİCKNAME+Bigman.REAL NAME+Jason ENN.OCCUPATİON+reporter.AGE+20.LİKES+helping people,his girlfriend Jessie,his father.DOESNT LİKE+bad people and dragons.CAN+brawl bad people,fly and carry people.CANT+run and carry homes.ADJECTİVES+very tall,very strong,helpful,kind,short yellow hair and small blue eyes.CLOTHES+a White and yellow man costume,a mask. my superheros nickname is Bigman real name is Jason ENN.He is a brawling bad people.He is twenty.He likes helping people,his girlfriend Jessie,his father but he doesnt like bad people and dragons.He can brawl bad people,fly and carry people but he cant run and carry homes.He is very tall,very strong,helpful and kind.He has short yellow hair and small blue eyes.He is wearing a white and yellow man costume and a mask.

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    1. Çok minik hatalar. Onun dışında, Perfect Sentences !!
      Well done !!

      Brawl = Fight
      He is a brawling bad people - He is fighting bad people
      cant - can't

      THANK YOU !! <3

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  5. Miss GOKSAL ben merve tunboylu

    Nickname : Wind
    Real name : Mary Mark
    Occupation : teacher
    Age : 20
    Likes : go to cinema , play basketbol
    Doesn't like : play football , draw pictures
    Can : run fast , ride a horse
    Can't : drive a car , ride a bike
    Edjectives : long hair , fat , tall
    Clothes : blue dress , pink dress, purple shoes

    My superhero nickname is Win and realnl name is Mary Mark. She is teacher and she twenty years old. She likes go to cinema and play basketball bu she doesn ' t like play football draw pictures. She can run fast and ride a horse but she can't drive a car and ride a bike. She have got long hair . She is fat and tall. She wearing blue dress or pink dress and purple shoes or green shoes. My superhero is very nice

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    1. Like kuralına dikkat ettikten sonra çok başarılı cümleler.

      Like 'ı takip eden fiillere -ing koymayı unutmayalım.
      She likes go to cinema and play basketball bu she doesn ' t like play football draw pictures.- She likes goING to the cinema and playING basketball but she doesn't like playING football OR drawING pıctures.
      she can't drive a car and ride a bike. - She can't drive a car OR ride abike.
      She wearing... - She is wearing ...

      THANK YOU !! <3

      Sil
  6. ELANAZ ÖZÜÇELİK

    Nick Name: Medusa
    Real Name:bloom
    Occupation:wood nymph
    Age:18
    Likes:Helping people and animals,flowers,trees,rain,sun
    Doesn't like:storm.bad people.waste
    Can:flying.jumping.singing.dancing.run fast
    Can't:swiming
    Adjective:helpfull,cheerful,playful,long blonde hair,green,eyes
    Clothes:a White dress and White shoes

    My superheros nickname is Medusa and her realname is Bloom.
    She is a wood nymph. She is eightteen .She likes helping people, animals, flowers, trees, rain and sun but she dosen't like bad paeople, storm, waste. She can flying, singing, dancing, jumping, but she can't swimming, running. She is helpfull , cheerful, playful. she has got long blonde hair and green eyes she is wearing
    white dress and white shoes.
    She has got long blode hair and green eyes
    She is wearing white drees and white shoes.
    shoes

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    1. Mükemmel bir gelişme Elanaz'cım. Yine de aşağıda belirttiğim kurallara biraz daha dikkat edelim :)

      Can sonrasında fiile bir takı getirmeye gerek yok Elanaz'cım.
      She can flying, singing, dancing, jumping, but she can't swimming, running. - She can FLY, DANCE AND JUMP but she can't SWIM OR RUN.
      eightteen - eighteen
      Bir de and, but, or kullanımına daha dikkat edelim.

      THANK YOU !! <3

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  7. Kutay Canbek
    Real name:Jackson Cedric
    Nickname:Wolverine
    Age:25
    Occupation: Salesperson


    His has got hand knife , X Man team , blue eyes , light yellow clothes and
    super force . He likes eat food ,fight bad man . He doesn't like lose , hungry , sleep . I like WoIwerine and the Super Heroes .


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    1. Biraz kısa olmuş sanki. Bir sonraki ödevini daha ayrıntılı bekliyorum Kuaty'cım :)

      Like 'ı takip eden fiilere -ing ekini takmayı unutmayalım. Aynı zamanda and, but, or gibi bağlaçların kullanımına dikkat edelim.

      He likes eat food ,fight bad man . He doesn't like lose , hungry , sleep - He likes eatING food AND fightING bad mEn BUT he doesn't like losING ,BEING hungry OR sleepING.

      THANK YOU !! <3

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  8. EZGİ ÜNSAL
    Nickname: isabella
    Real name: mia thomas
    Occupation: actris
    Age: 21
    Likes: hollowen party,talking and her boyfrend
    Doesn't like: sleping
    Can: eat sugar and run fast
    Can't: jump
    Adjectives:long hair blu eyes
    Clothesorange dreses
    my superhero is isabella and her real name is mia thomes.she is an actres and she is te twenty one yeras old.she likes hollowen party bun dosnt like sleep much.she can eat very big sugar but she cant drink.she has long hair and blu eyes

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    1. Ezgi'cim işin güzel tarafı aslında cümlelerinde büyük hatalar yok. Dikkat etmen gereken şey yazılışlar. Çok fazla harf hataları var. Bunlara dikkat ettiğin sürece bir sıkıntı yaşamazsın.

      she is twenty one YEARS old.
      hAllowEen
      buT SHE doEsn't like sleepING
      very big sugar - A LOT OF sugar
      cant - can't
      bluE

      THANK YOU !! <3

      Sil
    2. teşekkürler miss göksal dağa dikkatli olacağım

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